The dimensionary travelr!!:)

[[-Trogan-]]

This was on SSP but i will post on both there and here if you guys like it enough.




(main idea of story here:::::: i have a theory that there are inf dimensions and all television shows (even cartoons/anamie's) happen in different dimensions for it(just an idea)


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main character is (insert my real name here(real name is Lucas Gray Beverly) he has 1 bionic arm like this guys one http://superherouniverse.com/wiki/im...borg-comic.jpg except his is green)(had it ripped off when he was in another dimension in a fight so it was replaced with stargate atlantis's replicator nanites.
and he has just been from the dimension of (doctor who(new series not the old ones)) (reason why(he is making a dimension log pose for allowed dimension travel at will for all life on every dimension) he fin logging the pose there(and he has played computergames before(including starsiege(his faveriote game)) and now he finds him self at the end of earthsiege2 and start of starsiege.




Story: Chapter One ::



he arrived at a abondend mars mining depot near carter flates and wonderd where he was.
"Could this be an earth that has beed dried up of all water" he said.
just then he saw a banshee above him and it immeditly fired upon him.
Quickly he ran for cover and returend fire from his micanic like arm that shooted a beam of light encompassing the banshee in seconds. the pilot ejected and to his surprize the pilot noticed him making a super jump towards him. then he knoticed the remain's of the banshee falling ontop of him.

Once Lucas had saved the pilot he begain to question where he was.
he looked around at the sky to get his berrings and saw earth, the moon, and Saturn.
so he knew immeditly where he was and what dimension he was in.
when he found out he let off a huge grin from ear to ear.
he was on mars during the start of the rebelion in the last earthsiege.


to be continued

[[-Trogan-]]

Chapter One Part Two
as he walked to where he rememberd where the rebelion was at he noticed some herc's walking to the south and "why not" he said as he primed his sonicblaster arm and ran to them and hijacked they're baslisk and made another sonicblaster to mount on one of the sides of the herc and he was then back off after adapting a cloak from a tunnel that he found that was abandond.
He turnd on the cloak and imm begain back on his trip to get to mole command to sign up. "i figure whill i am here i might as well get to live my dream that i have been waiting for" he said as he was riding with his arm.
just then unknown to him his arm talked to him and said "here we go again". He thought it was just his audio player on his arm messing with him. so he turnd the audio player off.
"that didnt do anything i am alive" the arm said.
Lucas looking dazzeld at this new transaction knoticed that his neral interface to the arm was stuck to his back and it had copyed data from the brain to make a awarness to what happens around it.
Lucas then said "well then there is nothing i can do you want a name?"
the arm said "yes please" Lucas thought this arm has manners too haha.
Lucas said "how about transfer scince you transfered data to make your self?"
The Blaster arm now in normal mode(just a hand) said "yes, i like that name."
So Lucas and Transfer were getting to be great friends by the time they got to Mole command.




just then out of no where he got a signal from mole command asking who he was and what was his intentions.
Lucas replyed with "i came to join the rebalion i hijacked this baslisk as proff of my worth and loyaltiy to this cause.
they opend tunnel garsion 6 to let him in and as he was entering he saw a Emancapator with a blaster and emp running out. Lucas let off a cuckle as he saw Striker One leaving for his first mission.



to be continued

[Angel-A]

The story could be much improved if it wasn't so badly spelled... (Ever hear of Spell Checkers?)

[[-Trogan-]]

The story could be much improved if it wasn't so badly spelled... (Ever hear of Spell Checkers?)

Urm believe it or not i did use spell checker for alot of it. but some I spelled so badly that even spell checker didnt know what I meant.

[Cloudburst]

Urm believe it or not i did use spell checker for alot of it. but some I spelled so badly that even spell checker didnt know what I meant.

THEN FUCKING LEARN ENGLISH.

HOT DAMN.

(a)

[[-Trogan-]]

THEN ******* LEARN ENGLISH.

HOT DAMN.

(a)

I have you need to learn to stop cussing so much.

[Weatherlight]

Yourtube, you ever play the Sims? Ever see when one of the Sims tries something and everyone boos him because he isn't very good?

Yeah, right now you're that Sim. If you keep working at it no matter what these lowlifes say you'll get better. Just keep working on it, get some basic criticism and editing done and you'll be the better for it.

Of course, I don't trust any of the monkeyfuckers around here to do a half-assed decent editing job.

[Angel-A]

I have you need to learn to stop cussing so much.

At tJY, we like good spelling and grammar. We ridicule those who cannot spell correctly because we hate bad spelling. We hate bad spelling because bad spelling is a symptom of idiocy. And the Junkyard hates idiots. Every time we see idiots, we punch them to beat small amounts of intelligence into them, and to teach them to stop being dumbasses.
If you do not learn to spell at tJY, we will continue to beat you until you do learn, and if you don't until you leave so we don't have to look at your spelling, which looks as if you simply banged your hand on the keyboard in the hopes that words will come out.
If you spell so badly even the spell checker doesn't understand you, you suck donkey ass on spelling, do you enjoy raping our language with your keyboard?

Have I now clarified why we are swearing at you?

[[-Trogan-]]

um angel i see maybey 5-7 mispelled words there and only those so the rest was ok and please comment on how the story is going so far please as this is my first time writing a War story.

[Angel-A]

Still badly done.

A lot more than five errors too.

[Cloudburst]

um angel i see maybey 5-7 mispelled words there and only those so the rest was ok and please comment on how the story is going so far please as this is my first time writing a War story.

Spelling means nothing so long as it's not terribly horrid. What's wrong with you is your English Grammar. So,

FUCKING LEARN ENGLISH.

HOT DAMN.

[Angel-A]

The grammar is pretty bad, is so awkardly worded. =P

[[-Trogan-]]

yea if you said Grammer instead of Spelling i would have agreed with you cause as i was typeing that i had thought if i was wording it right.

well anyway what do you think of the story should i continue it BUT use proper grammer this time?

[Angel-A]

It's okay I guess. =/

It's hard to read something badly typed though...

[[-Trogan-]]

whatever i will continue it though later when i get the chance.