The dimensionary travelr!!:)

[Cloudburst]

um angel i see maybey 5-7 mispelled words there and only those so the rest was ok and please comment on how the story is going so far please as this is my first time writing a War story.

Spelling means nothing so long as it's not terribly horrid. What's wrong with you is your English Grammar. So,

FUCKING LEARN ENGLISH.

HOT DAMN.

[Angel-A]

The grammar is pretty bad, is so awkardly worded. =P

[[-Trogan-]]

yea if you said Grammer instead of Spelling i would have agreed with you cause as i was typeing that i had thought if i was wording it right.

well anyway what do you think of the story should i continue it BUT use proper grammer this time?

[Angel-A]

It's okay I guess. =/

It's hard to read something badly typed though...

[[-Trogan-]]

whatever i will continue it though later when i get the chance.